Bay Area Models Wanted
09-28-2003, 09:28 PM
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Composition is excellent.... my fav is the bottom pic (lying on the leopard skins). Top row, middle and far right are a little too bright for my tastes, but again -- composition is superb! Good luck!
09-28-2003, 10:15 PM
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wow marcus, way cool shots. Wish you could come out to Shanghai and I could find you a few cool wannabe models to shoot (guys and gals) Shot of Z looks great too. Please say hi for me and Jen. The first shots are a little on the bright side and the lense glare either should be accented for art-sake, or minimized. My opinion of course.
Nice to come back to the Bay Area nad see you online AND with such a cool thread.
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Nice to come back to the Bay Area nad see you online AND with such a cool thread.
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09-29-2003, 02:14 AM
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overall, nice pics. but as a constructive criticism, you can learn to play with the depth of field a little more especially when it comes to portraits. in the first 3 pics, everything is so focused--subject, foreground, background--that my eyes do not know what to focus on (from a photographic perspective--DUH!!) so my attention is divided amongst every single object in the pics (including the verticle blinds in one of the pics).